confection

[nush]

"she drew me to her mouth and sang;

her, the siren,

and i, the swan."

hi so are you insane ?????? this is gorgeous WOW

[nia 🌷]

im glad you liked that line though i was worried nobody would get it LOL

[nia 🌷]

AHHH THANK YOU good to know that im occasionally insane in a good way

[Chad R Herman]

This poem is amazing. I love how visceral the poem is. This exploded in my head, and I'm thirsty for more. I love the structure. I've never see this before and I love it. What a great poem. So glad I've subscribed to you.

[nia 🌷]

thank you so much!! i try to experiment with form, it was new for me too so im glad you liked it :)

[iris♡]

i love love love this

[nia 🌷]

ty ty ty <33

[Gray Silver]

The form you used really makes the poem ‘sing’ 🩷🩷

[nia 🌷]

THANK YOU SO MUCHH i love experimenting with form im glad it works!!

[Gray Silver]

🥰🥰🥰🩷🩷🩷

[Gray Silver]

Love thisss 🫶🏻🫶🏻🫶🏻

[Gray Silver]

UR JOKINGGGG 😍😍😍🩷🩷🩷